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ToneSee all 2 findings in the review reportBefore “setting off petition drives across the country”
After “Appearing on CNN's Larry King Live on February 20, 1992, Texas businessman Ross Perot said he would run for president as an independent if volunteers got his name on the ballot in all 50 states, prompting petition drives across the country.”
Why: "Setting off" carries a slightly dramatic, kinetic connotation compared to a neutral causal verb. "Prompting petition drives across the country" or "leading volunteers to begin petition drives" would convey the same documented fact without the added charge.